Even Numbers

I've been picking away at this story changing a few words here and there for the last few days, but I don't think it's really making any difference. This is as good at it's gonna get. So here it is. Tell me what you think. Even if you think it's awful.

TITLE: Even Numbers
AUTHOR: prepare4trouble
CATEGORY: Traders. Romance(ish), Preslash
SPOILERS: Everything up to 'The Big Picture', really. But mostly just 'Sharper Than A Serpent's Tooth' and 'The Big Picture'
PAIRING: Grant Jansky/Donald D'Arby
RATING: PG-13 (I think. I don't quite get the US ratings!)
WARNINGS: Preslash
SUMMARY: Grant and Donald sort out their feelings about each other and Magda
DISCLAIMER: Obviously, I don't own Traders. It would be very cool if I did though!
NOTES: Starts at the end of 'The Big Picture' where Grant is on the computer talking to Magda

( Even Numbers )